Thanks eco-dek. sorry for the late reply. Generally I post most of my material at the London Based Macidol GarageBand site.

My 'Jamroom' music page;
http://www.macidol.com/jamroom/bands/469/music.php

BUT I will continue to post my best songs here given that your all so damn good !!

Cheers :)

This song has some stuff like VU-4th!!
So, I can feel your sounds real. Very real.
Yes, this is completely real for me, over seas.
And I found the peace with Kids Are Allright.
I love this tune!

(Japanese Translation)

So Beautiful
とてもきれい

ぼくら、星々のところまで行こうよ、やってみるかい
身を任せるだけでいい……少しの間
そして、きみはとてもクール、あんまり酔ってないときは ※1
そう、この素晴らしい新世界におやすみのキスを ※2

そして、分かってくれるかい……
すべてがとてもきれいなことを？
そして、つまり……
ぼくはただ、きみに正直でありたいだけ

今夜、月をぼくらの腕で抱えてやるんだ
きみの顔は銀色の光に輝く、
バンドが 'the kids are alright' を演奏するとき ※3
そして、煙がぼくらを見えないところまで吹き飛ばす

そして、分かってくれるかい……
きみは、あぁ、とてもきれいだよ
そして、つまり……
ぼくはただ、きみに正直でありたいだけ

ぼくらは「空飛ぶじゅうたん」で飛んでいるんだ
薬は内面の痛みを取り去る
ぼくだって飲めるけど、情緒不安定からはほど遠いよ
テーブルの上で寝ているしましま「猫」に尋ねてごらん ※4
そして、分かってくれるかい……
ぼくらは、とてもきれいだ
そして、つまり……
ぼくはただ、きみに正直でありたいだけ


訳註
※ tight には、「きつい」、「ケチ」、「酔った」等、色々意味があって困った。
※2 「素晴らしい新世界」はシェークスピアの戯曲『テンペスト』のセリフとか。
※3 'KIDS ARE ALRIGHT' は THE WHO の曲
※4 しましま猫は『不思議の国のアリス』に出てくる変な猫。

I heard this song and thought that I resembled anorak sounds(Pastels,BMXbandits,etc).

I like this song.

Thank you! Mr.clanger

I enjoy myself, investigating the meaning of these lyrics.
Thank you very much for fulfilling my wish.
Let's enjoy "Garageband" together with us from now on.

Hi all.. hi Mr Hide !!
I hope the guitars arent THAT out of tune :) Although its true that some was deliberate. Anyhow great to do and lots of fun.

The lyrics are these.

So Beautiful

We are going to make it to the stars if we try
just give it all.....a little time
and your so cool when your not so tight
so kiss this brave new world goodnight

And would you know...
Its all so beautiful ?
And after all...
I just want to be true to you

We will hold the moon in our arms tonight
Your face shines in the silver light
As the band plays 'the kids are alright'
And the smoke blows us out of sight

And would you know....
Your oh so beautiful.
And after all.....
All I want is to be true to you

We are flying on a 'magic carpet ride'
The medicine takes away the pain inside
I could drink it but I'm far too unstable!
Just ask the striped 'cat' asleep on the table

And would you know.....
We are so beautiful
And after all....
All I want is to be true to you

Hi!! clangler,Nice to meet you AGAIN!!
I'm HIDE, Can you remember me?

I'm proud of My Poor English could lead you here;)
hehehe;)

I'm grad to see you here again!
and hear your nice music!
and comment this music!

I like this "so beautiful" song!
so Wonderfull, so Delicious.
so Sweet of your voice and guiter which slightly detuned.
It caused very large "Clanger's World"

thanks! for your posting!
CU! :)

I like this!!!!!!!

I think, "the English music it seems", it is the tune which is
fragrant.
The kind of feeling where the television performed "enola gay"
of ELO was received.

It is the guitar and the calling feeling.

Because automatic translation was used, perhaps English which you make　a mistake.

fantastic!!!!!

Hello,Mr."not Clanger"
Thank you for giving a reply.

Now, Would you fulfill my request?
Please let me know the poetry of this music.
I want to translate into Japanese and to know a meaning.

I'm It is strange English which I speak.
It apologizes from the bottom of its heart.
I will need your help, if very well.

I like and hear doors,who,T.rex,V.U., and Johnny Thunders.........
In addition, it is in large numbers.
Of course, I also like "Shine On You Crazy Diamond".

儚い（hakanai）
切ない（setsunai）
Beauty like the flame of a candle.

thank you so much eco_dek

儚い（hakanai）
切ない（setsunai）
Beauty like the flame of a candle.

I'm sorry. I cannot speak English.
but, I wanted to tell.
so beautiful!

>Probably too late to change it now as I want to focus on new songs.
>Time to move on.

hi, clanger. I love your comments! Yes! it's true. Keep on going forward!

Anyway, I especially like your guiter sound. It is almost out of pich, but so cool!! Your guitar reminds me the sound of Larry Coryell who played "heavy" guitar in late '60s -'70s. I really love it!

Thanks gigo and &D~
It started off as a Velvet Underground style groove but quickly developed a life of its own. I'm really pleased with the crunchy overdriven guitar sound. I will keep these settings in garageband as a template for other songs.


Garageband rocks !!

:D

Hi clanger,

I liked your music very much. I didn't know what you chatted. However precise details of your sounds were not important any. More important was what you liked and expressed. And I believed many people could fell that.

The music liked 60th the Facotry sounds in NYC.
A little nostalgic and beautiful!
I really loved.

I like Velevet. Therefore, this is also very very wonderful.

We found each other in the chat.
However I fear any unedited time lag between the drums and the instruments may be my brain getting in the way. Probably too late to change it now as I want to focus on new songs.
Time to move on.

I thought we could talk at the chat room but you were already
gone... I wanted to ask you few questions about your song. I liked it a lot.
I wanna know which computer (spec) you used to make this song, and I also wanna know why there's a time lag between the
drum loops and the other instrument.
I hope I can see you at the chat room soon.

sorry, my English may be wrong...

please see me at the chat room!

Im sorry I only have English.

T-レックスなんかの雰囲気がしてグラムロックとか好きそうっすね。
使用したコンピューターのセットは、何を使用したのですか？
ドラムのループとギターやベースがずれてるのはインターフェイスに
問題があるのですか？それともHDDの回転数の関係なんでしょうか？
garageband は自分でとったギターやベースをクゥオンタイズできないのでしょうか？or should I write this message in English?

thank u !!

解説の直訳 (Japanese translation)：

４日前に完成したフレッシュなオリジナル曲です。またもや、使ったループは、メインのドラム・パートだけです。その他の全てのパートとボーカルは自分で演奏しました。サキソフォンはキーボードで演奏しました。
もしあなたがシド・バレット、ザ・フーやベルベット・アンダーグラウンドが好きなら、この曲の中にその影響を聴き取ることはたやすいと思います。
'so beautiful' を楽しんでくれると嬉しいです。

Wow! So beautiful! So lovely! So Punk!

Yo! What's Up!

Hahhaa-------.
This is 'Clanger WORLD' full slotl!!!
This is BOMB!!!